I AM GOING TO BE A PUBLISHED WRITER

Today I got mail from the short sory entry I did for the first term honors english assignment. I thought they were going to send me junk mail saying sorry, but you suck. Well on the contrary, they want to publish my short essay in a collection of entries. AWESOME! Also today my family and I bought a pool table for Christmas! ALSO AWESOME! Lastly, I had the best dance ever! I had so much fun and met a ton of new people. There were so many people I knew there. It was the most fun i have ever had.

Bored....SO BORED

It is Saturday afternoon. I AM SO BORED! At least there is a church dance tonight! My friend is gonna come over and it is gonna be awesome. Then we are gonna go to the dance and have a boat load of fun. Then it is Sunday and then Monday. which is school. The weekend is just too short. I wish it was longer. Next week we only have 2 days in school though, and that is thanks to Thanksgiving. Let me tell you, I am thankful. Another thought on my mind is whether or not my last sentence was a comma splice.

For Those of You Who Haven't...

Check out http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Mdt2Q0rzrcM

This is a video my friend and I made. It is just a funny video, but don't have any expectations whatsoever. After all I don't want to disappoint you do I? Of course not...This video took an entire Saturday afternoon. It is quite random and I have seen better movies made by monkeys. Although humans and monkeys are both primates. Some people think humans shouldn't be considered as part of the animal kingdom. Then what are we? Aliens? No, the definition of alien is someone foreign, or from outer space. Last time I checked my birth certificate doesn't say Mars. Maybe we belong with the plants then! Once again no, plants grow from the ground. Then what could we be? What else is there then aliens, plants, and animals? Of course I know, bacteria! Nope, once again we are not those. We can't be rocks, we can only be humans. Now what is the definition of human? Assuming that you believe we can't be animals how could you define human? Dictionary.com says human is relating to people. What is the definition of people? Human beings. Anyone else catch that loop? People just need to suck it up and embrace their monkey brethren.

My Last Post

Upon rereading my last post I realize the stupidity of which I wrote those words. In fact that post was so stupid I think I am just gonna go and delete it...

Those who can write......and those who can't

NOTE* Don't read this if you are easily offended, or if you think you are a good writer and really aren't...

It seems for this class assignment that everyone says "Oh I will just write a story, I am a good writer." Now let me clear something up for you. Most of you are not very good writers at all. I am not trying to be rude but it seems as if no one is willing to take the point of the critic. If everyone in this class were to start stories and everyone was to comment on each others I bet there would be no negative statement. That is just stupid. There are only a handful in this class that can write worth a hoot, and at that only maybe one or two of the handful can write well. I am not trying to discourage you guys from writing because my bet is that those that can worth a hoot have written a lot. So continue writing, but come on people, step up to the plate and tell someone when they fail. If you were to have a cooking class and everyone made cookies and everyone tried each others. Those that made hard, over baked, cookies should be told so, or they will never learn. Those that mix the sugar measurement with the salt measurement, (I had a kid in my cooking class do that 0_o) should be told what they did horribly wrong. So if you do write, continue to to get better, however don't expect that all your writing is worthy of only positive feedback. I am just sick of those who only think they can write well compared to those who can. Please those writing a story don't take offense, continue to write, you will get better than me! I suck at writing, so should I write something I expect negative feedback. My only plea is don't think I am bashing you, but don't think your writing is awesome...

Another thought, for those commenting on writing they know is bad and saying is good. Step up to the plate or you will strike out. It is impossible to go through life making everybody happy. Thoughts should be expressed, feeling are meant to be hurt, if are feelings were never hurt we would never mature. Like our skin. It gets tougher the more it gets cut, or pulled, stretched, or in anyway had force exerted upon it. The more cuts, the more scar tissue. If our skin was never touched, we would be extremely harmed the first time it did. This applies to feelings too. If we are always tiptoed around then the one day someone steps on our feet we will cry mercy. Which is no way to become an adult and functioning person of society.

Bottom line- Life is gonna beat you down, kick you in the mouth, pull you back up only so they can punch you again, kick you in the stomach, and finally if you haven't died yet, tie you to the back of a sports car and have it race off. Life SUCKS, get over it. You won't make it through life happy the entire time, or without ridicule. Someone somewhere will say the truth. And it will hurt. Or if no one tells you the truth you will never be free. If you make cookies and everyone says they are perfect, but really they taste like crap, you will make them again. And AGAIN! No one wants to hurt you so now you have no idea. But if someone tells you after a year of making them every week you are gonna cry and want to shout and feel horrible.

The WAY bottom line- The truth must be told.

Sorry if it offends you, but oh well for you. Life is hard, get a helmet.

Eyes

We have two of em. On our faces, at least I hope on our faces. We are almost always taking in visual images. Watching, thinking, and computing. When someone says something we always have a thought or two about. How do we know what others think? We don't. So how do we act to make others happy? We can't easily make others happy. It makes it hard. My actions everyday could cause one person to go home in tears and another with a grin. Where do we learn how to make no one cry and everyone happy? Nowhere, at least nowhere I have been. So what do we do? What can we do?

My Immortal -Evanescense

My Immortal lyrics

I'm so tired of being here Suppressed by all my childish fears And if you have to leave I wish that you would just leave 'Cause your presence still lingers here And it won't leave me alone

These wounds won't seem to heal This pain is just too real There's just too much that time cannot erase

[Chorus:]When you cried I'd wipe away all of your tearsWhen you'd scream I'd fight away all of your fearsAnd I held your hand through all of these yearsBut you still haveAll of me

You used to captivate me By your resonating light Now I'm bound by the life you left behind Your face it haunts My once pleasant dreams Your voice it chased away All the sanity in me

These wounds won't seem to heal This pain is just too real There's just too much that time cannot erase

[Chorus]

I've tried so hard to tell myself that you're gone But though you're still with me I've been alone all along

[Chorus]

Beautiful song, one of the few Evanescense I like